Wednesday, January 27, 2010

The Gift Of Forgiveness, Poem A Poem Of Forgiveness, Comments/critiques?

A poem of forgiveness, comments/critiques? - the gift of forgiveness, poem

I woke up the dreams of the past
I feel a lack of grip
Heart come to me
Answer
unanswered questions

I write
without prior notice
Dress Me
Dresses forgiveness

Dresses forgiveness
Soft Touch
slowly healing my pain
The world has changed

remain in my heart
Main gently
the newness of life
Riding o'er the fight

the gift of love continues
as Lay You Down
To live only once
His life is eternal

12 comments:

MJ Obsession said...

It is a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing:)

deerwoma... said...

Forgiveness is the color white .. has been awarded ..

wishnuwe... said...

What a beautiful poem made me cry. Would not It Be Nice, where there is forgiveness, that comforting.

♥ Bernice ♥Happy 2010 said...

Very creative

Nora G said...

absolutely beautiful

Cougar said...

very good. Thank you for sharing.

Soft Heart said...

:)))) That's lovely

Kim P said...

I like that!

Kim P said...

I like that!

Kim P said...

I like that!

The angry Matt said...

Its very good man.

Kita said...

I'm not a poetry person, but this time my heart was touched. Thank you!

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